四六级考试越来越使模板无用武之地，阅卷老师在阅卷的过程中最多的是关注同学们的用词和句型的使用。
高分作文标志
1：四级120-150字；六级150-180字；
2是否长短句交叉；
3用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；
4关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实句子开头不要总是用we/I（比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.）举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：Itisthereforehightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus，itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.
2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说：Otherindividualshowevertaketheattitudethat…
3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现goodbadmanythingthinkpeopleopinion等等）比如上面例子中，applicable代替properapproaches代替waysimplement代替carryoutsharpenone’’scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone’’scompetitiveness（提高某物竞争力）
下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
ComputerandIBySimmy
Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresentwhichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpectedandenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleeplessfeelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.
exceedingly替换very
thrilling替换exciting
sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
google替换search
anarmyof替换alotof
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnologycomputerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbytheminlargemeasure!
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；
Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular
Coincidentwith…非常地道的词汇，表达＂与…一致＂的意思，替换With…
Advancement替换development
Pourinto替换enterinto
Current(currently)替换now
Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople
Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的
Forastartwecanfreelysearchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittleourknowledgewillbewellenrichedandourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionallywecangethugerecreationsonlinebychattingplayinggamesordeliveringemail.
Forastart替换Tobeginwith
Wecanfreelysearch用了插入语的写作手法
ourknowledgewillbewellenrichedandourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动